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My first book is coming out next Wednesday. Here are 13 consecutive lines from it.
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“Hey, Stud Muffin—what’s your name?” Miranda asked as if it didn’t matter that they were gossiping about him.
“Trigvey. Trigvey Taylor.” He threw the clothes in his arms over a suitcase.
“I’m Miranda. This is Suzie. And that…” Miranda arched a long-nailed finger, “is Diane.”
Diane cringed as everything from her toes to her ears went blush-hot.
“Nice to meet you…Diane?” He glanced at Diane, turned away and glanced at her again as if worried about what he saw in her expression. “Got to run.”
He left eight suitcases in varying shapes and colors behind him.
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I am so excited for you!
Bit of a head buzz isn’t it? Way to go Alice and have a good time with everything that comes next, may your fingers cramp from all of the book signings.
That’s so exciting. Congratulations! Can’t wait to read it, because those 13 lines are a real tease.
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Ooh, that’s so exciting. Congratulations.
Suitcases, huh?
You’ve got a natural flare for teasing your reader, my friend. Mazel Tov on the upcoming release.
oooh. Now I wanna know why she’s having that reaction, and why they’re gossiping about him, and…
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Dude! Why’d he run?
I must know!!!
I love a good well packed sentence. I can only read 7 of them though.
I had the hardest time deciding how to count my sentences. I’m such a messy writer.
It sounds like a wonderful book, Alice.
Congratulations!
The suitcases made me laugh.
So exciting!! I’m loving, “Miranda arched a long-nailed finger”….great description!
He left 8 suitcases in varying shapes and colors……this little snippet makes me want to see what is going to happen next.
Happy TT!
YAY!!!! I can’t wait until this is available!!!! I’ll be ALL over it.
ohhhh… how exciting. My first T13 in three weeks. took the last two weeks off.
Congratulations on your first release! It’s exciting, isn’t it?!
*hugs*
Paige
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Awesome for you! I am so excited to tell my friends I know a real live author!! Congratulations!
tee hee. *huge, enormous, wild grin*
“arched a long-nailed finger” I like that!
Congratulations on the new book.
Congratulations! That’s terrific. Best of luck to you.
I am so excited for you! I hope the good guy gets the girl.
how exciting for you. Congratulations!
Great dialogue! Congrats on publishing.