
“Huh. That Tracy.” Ben said as he and Gene walked home. He couldn’t believe she had kissed both Gene and himself right there in Lisa’s living room with Lisa watching and everything.” She’s really something,”
“Yeah. She is.” Gene grinned like he knew something more.
Ben hated it when Gene got like that, all mysterious and knowing. He walked half a step faster down the uneven sidewalk with his head up like it belonged up there in the bright green leaves of Summer trees. Half the time he didn’t know jack. But the other half he did and Ben could never be sure which was which without asking. So he asked. “So what does it mean?”
“Isn’t that obvious? It leans Tracy is mine.” Gene’s grin got bigger.
“How do you come up with that?” Like he really minded. Except he didn’t want to come in second, even with a girl who wasn’t all that comfortable to be around.
“She kissed me longer, didn’t she?”
“Yeah, but she kissed me first.”
“But when she kissed you, she was looking to see what Lisa was thinking. Didn’t you notice?”
Ben had noticed. He’d also noticed the way Lisa got really mad about Tracy kissing himself, but not so mad about kissing Gene. Or maybe he just wanted it to seem that way. “Well, if Tracy’s yours then Lisa’s mine.”
“Huh. No big deal there. Lisa’s been yours all along.”
“I wish,” Ben muttered. As if all these weeks when he’d been agonizing about who she liked better didn’t count.
“What? You didn’t know?”
“No I didn’t know. How am I supposed to know something like that?”
“I thought it was obvious.” Gene glanced over his shoulder, one eyebrow arched.
“Yeah, right.”
They hit Jennifer Street and walked along in silence for a while. It was weird. When he and Lisa left the house that morning it was just another day of vacation. Nothing much was going on except Mom getting strange about Lisa. Now everything looked different, even the old houses and all the cars parked up and down the street.
“So. Now that we know who belongs to who, what are we going to do about it?”
“I don’t know.” Gene shrugged.
“I think…. Maybe… we should go on a double date.” Ben wanted to go out with Lisa, but he was still nervous. It would be better to do it with a friend.
Gene didn’t answer that for way too long. When he did, it was mostly a grunt.
Yeah, well. Whatever. Whether Gene or Tracy would come along or not, Ben was going to got out with Lisa. He’d ask her even if he had to close his eyes to get the words out.
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That Ben sure is a brave one. Lisa better say yes!
These things are so difficult at that age. I guess that’s why a lot of young people today go out in groups.
I love the way you write kids, Alice.
This has to be the best line: He’d ask her even if he had to close his eyes to get the words out.
Excellent!
I’m so glad you like it. I almost cut it last night, but I couldn’t think of a better replacement.
This particular plot bunny has come to a resting point. I’ve got plenty more plans for the kids, but nothing says I have to dive in right now.
So what would you like to see more of now? Would you like next week to be a double date? Would you like to see what Drew is up to? Would you be interested in something about Suzie? I’ve even got an idea that would take us back to Diane.
I already know you all are willing to go wherever I take you, because that’s what you say every time I ask. I’m just saying if you’ve got a preference, this would be a good time to voice it.
I’d be happy with the kids’ double date, but I also wouldn’t mind seeing what Drew’s been up to.
Oh, Ben is so great! You’ve got these kids’ characterizations down nicely.
Great writing, Alice and enjoyable story!
‘ “She kissed me longer, didn’t she?”
“Yeah, but she kissed me first.” ‘
I love their systematic way of sorting themselves into couples. And I agree with Brynna about the best line.
Where to go next…? Maybe Drew?
I’m adding my tardy vote to more of Drew. I’ve missed him.
I also agree with everyone, you do a fantastic job with the kids, I’d love to see them on a double date. LOL.
Great jog Alice!!!
Ahh, I feel like we’re back on track here. The banter between the boys is awesome.