Reviews For Moving In
Seriously Reviewed said "You know? Every so often you read a story that starts a little slow on the first few pages and then.....BAM it just explodes! This was one of them for me."
Kaye's Book Review Page
on which she said The book is "short, sweet, light-hearted and just plain fun."
Vince at Philosophy of Romance said "Alice Audrey’s voice is fresh, feisty, full of surprises and always fun. The author also deals with real people having real problems and she does it in a very insightful way."
Nessa at Chrysalis Stage said "If you like sweet, fast-paced romance with a hot hero and all of the misunderstandings that two people can throw at each other, then you will love this story."
Night Owl Reviews didn't have anything nice to say about it. Hey, you can't win them all.
Brenda Talley of Romance Studio said " I recommend this book to anyone. It was a pleasure to read and I shall look for more of her work in the future. "
By Guta Bauer at Murphy's Library did it twice! Once in English and once in Portuguese. I'm assuming they both say, "Life goes on, choices need to be made and we can never let our past deny us of our future. That’s just some of the things we learn from this story. "
If you did a review of my book, let me know! I'll be glad to link to you, even if you didn't like the book.
Books by Friends Click on the cover to see more about them:
Yeah, I know the sizes are weird. What a pain. Anyway, if any of these books look interesting to you, click on them to read more.
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13 Sentences from My NaNo Book Here’s the beginning of the book and the wallpaper I made to keep me on track. I’m calling the book The Dragon’s Are Afoot.
I know you said to write it as if you would never read it, but I tried several times, and I can’t seem to get started. I’m sorry. It’s strange enough revealing everything, not knowing who you intend to give this to, but to act like you don’t know any of it…. But I’ll try again. When I get to the part where you come in, I’ll treat you like anybody else in this story. I’ll say “he” instead of “you” even though we both know it is you.
It all started when Mother threw me out. Isn’t it ironic that such a kindly and caring woman would throw me out when I was sick? No. When I think about it, she threw me out because I was sick. Me, the perpetual child with an iron constitution fell ill. Yeah, she did it because I was sick, and frankly, in her shoes I would do the same.
You were right when you said it was because at the age of 41, I was finally becoming an adult, even if I looked to be about 14 years old and was still growing.
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The Serialists 
This week's participants:
What is the Serialists? It's a chance to check out some great online fiction. Each Wednesday
a new post
goes up where people who write connected fiction can share their latest episodes. Click on that link to get to the post where you can put in your own link.
Here are some of the best:
Want to get in the permanent list? Participate in the Serialists meme with a few points in mind, and you will be.
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The second paragraph has a nice hook and by the time we get to the third and paragraph and the bit about being 41, I’m starting to wonder if I’m in a different world. I’m curious to read on.
A story with dragons and elves? I must stalk you to see if this gets finished and published.
Hmm, interesting. Maybe the character is a dragon. I loved the wallpaper. That’s a great idea.
I like it! Now you’re obligated to finish it so I know what happens
Happy T13,
~Xakara
13 Inspiring Quotes
dragons and elves – two of my favorite things!
happy thurs 13 I posted about my top 13 diet tips (helped me get from 308 to a healthy 135 lbs
healh and happiness, Lady Rose
Your NaNo book sounds awesome, Alice!
One of these days I’m going to get up enough courage to enter the competition. LOL Happy Thursday!
You definitely piqued my interest. Happy NaNoing.
Thanks for sharing! Good luck in NaNoWriMo. I’ve never done it, but I have had to write a book in the month.
That’s a lot of years in the basement playing never ending video games.
Slow start to this section but actually by about the fifth line you set the hook.
I’m intrigued!
Great stuff! I love the wall paper. It really sets the tone.
Thanks for sharing this and your wallpaper. Good luck in reaching your NaNo goal!
That’s quite a start – I’m intrigued to see how this develops. Best of luck to you!
Great lines. I think I might use this idea because I’m doing the Nano thing too. Happy TT!
Loved the 41 thing.
Have a great day!
http://harrietandfriends.com/2011/11/13-facts-about-veterans-day/
This is way cool. I hope you are happy with it and will finish. I applaud you for doing the NaNo thingy!
Sounds great!
My TT is at http://paigetylertheauthor.blogspot.com/
I’m intrigued. Best wishes!