Reviews For Moving In
Seriously Reviewed said "You know? Every so often you read a story that starts a little slow on the first few pages and then.....BAM it just explodes! This was one of them for me."
Kaye's Book Review Page
on which she said The book is "short, sweet, light-hearted and just plain fun."
Vince at Philosophy of Romance said "Alice Audrey’s voice is fresh, feisty, full of surprises and always fun. The author also deals with real people having real problems and she does it in a very insightful way."
Nessa at Chrysalis Stage said "If you like sweet, fast-paced romance with a hot hero and all of the misunderstandings that two people can throw at each other, then you will love this story."
Night Owl Reviews didn't have anything nice to say about it. Hey, you can't win them all.
Brenda Talley of Romance Studio said " I recommend this book to anyone. It was a pleasure to read and I shall look for more of her work in the future. "
By Guta Bauer at Murphy's Library did it twice! Once in English and once in Portuguese. I'm assuming they both say, "Life goes on, choices need to be made and we can never let our past deny us of our future. That’s just some of the things we learn from this story. "
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Welcome to Montana 
The man at the window of the pharmacy pick up has been drinking. He’s rosy, and jovial, and must be pushing eighty even if he does have a fine crop of grey under his Stetson.
“So, they let you out,” the pharmacist says warmly.
“Yep. Don’t know what the fuss was about. Just me and my brother arguing.”
“Must have been the gun you waved,” the pharmacist says, still smiling.

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HA! Every Pharm D I know either open carries (in independent pharmacies) or conceal carries.
Yeefuckinhaw, I love Oklahoma.
well that could pretty much come out of the newspapers around here…oy…drunk people with guns & family squabbles is a typical friday…ha…
Sounds pretty normal! Don’t know what all the fuss is about!
Alice Audrey…
Sometimes I can’t figure out whether your stories are fiction
or gleaned from your local paper.
It doesn’t matter they are always interesting
Loved your pharmaceutical 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week End
…sounds more like Texas!
This could have easily been gleaned from our local paper. There have been far too many incidents of random gunfire round here lately.
Maybe waving guns at each other is just what they do in that family, sort of a tradition.
“We wussn’t really arguing damn his eyes… sorry damn his eye!”
Yes, it kind of makes a difference, doesn’t it?
My ex husband lives in Montana, but he doesn’t own a gun. Our son is a pharmacy technician who is studying to be a doctor.
I wish my ex husband would come pick up his damn cat! He left her with me when he moved to Montana, and she doesn’t get along with my other cats.
Why is the pharmacist drinking? There is so many other things right at his fingertips. The other—guns seem to be open carry and few hesitate to wave them like a flag at a parade.
Love your scene! good job!
You always create a world right inside those 55, Alice Audrey. So clever!
Ha! This made me think of my dad, all rosy-cheeked and jovial with his glass of gin. Best medicine ever, he claims. At least he’s not waving guns. Love your big sky and your 55.
That might not even warrant an arrest here.
nice! yeah the gun turns it into such a big deal