This is a direct continuation from last week, in which Ben’s mother brings down a criminal with a frying pan the day she gives Ben permission to let Gene stay over on a school night.

“So, who was that guy? The one your mother hit with the frying pan.” Gene did this weird thing where he looked in the windows of his own house before he opened the door to go inside. Ben didn’t blame him.
“I told you.” Actually, he must have explained it all to Gene a dozen times since then, but Gene kept asking. “He’s the guy who tried to kidnap me.”
“I don’t get that. Why would anyone want to kidnap you? I mean, why you? It’s not like your parents are really rich or anything, even if your mother does own that house.”
Ben shrugged. He didn’t know why the guy wanted him. Thinking about it gave him the creeps, so he tried not to think about it.
“Think your mom will let me stay tomorrow night too?”
“I don’t know.” He didn’t want to admit to Gene how hard it was to get his mom to let them spend one school night together, let alone anything more. If his mom was more like Miranda, it would of been easier. But maybe Miranda was a little too much like Dad, so it was a good thing Suzie was his mom instead.
“She’s nice.”
“Miranda?”
“No.” Gene, swatted at Ben but didn’t seem to care when he missed. “Your mom. I like your mom.”
“Yeah.” Ben couldn’t quite make himself agree. After all, his mother had betrayed him, hadn’t she? She’d sent him away. That was a kind of betrayal.
“She cooks good too! Those were the best pork chops I ever had.” Gene led the way to his room. He grabbed his backpack with is books, stuffed in some clothes to wear tomorrow, and talked about how good Ben had it living where he did.
Ben didn’t feel like he had it so good. He used to. He knew real well he was lucky. Now he kept waiting for his luck to run out again. If she kicked him out now it would kill him. He stood in the doorway of Gene’s messy room, feeling bad and not wanting anyone to notice.
That might be why he was aware of the sound from the front door before Gene was. The click of the lock came right before the voices – a man and a woman arguing.
Ben only caught words and phrases. “Your fault,” came up a couple of times in the woman’s voice. The man, Gene’s father, answered angrily with a fair number of swear words. “If something-something finds out,” made Ben’s ears sharpen. He moved down the hall closer to the living room where he could hear better. After a minute or two, Gene joined him. Neither said anything.
“Fix it or I’ll tell everyone,” the woman said. Her voice was familiar, but Ben couldn’t place it. “I’ll expect to see you at my place tonight.”
The front door squeaked open.
“You want proof? Here’s your proof,” Gene’s father growled. Then there was silence.
Ben and Gene both leaned around the corner to see what was going on without showing anything but the tops of their heads. What was going on was a kiss. A big, wet one. Ben couldn’t decide if he found it exciting or revolting, but he couldn’t tear his eyes away.
Then the grown ups broke apart and Ben just about had a heart attack.
The woman was his teacher, Mrs. D.
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hmmm…very nice
And the plot thickens. What’s going on? LOL. What is Mrs. D doing with Gene’s dad? You really know how to throw a hook Alice. Can’t wait to find out.
Well done!
Holy Schmoly! Didn’t see that one coming, but I should have. Somehow it seems like these two are made of the same stuff. Loved the interaction with Gene and Ben. Excellent work, Alice!
*cackle, cackle, rubbing hands in glee* Wasn’t that a fun ending?
Yup, I never saw that coming, either. Loved it!
Oh, what a cliffhanger! Good job!
Thank you!
I suppose I should mention somewhere in here that Mrs. D is Ben’s sworn enemy. She’s not quite psychotic, but not a well rounded individual, and is likely to cause all kinds of problems for Ben. I didn’t want to mention her in my recap because I didn’t want to spoil the ending of this post for my long-time readers.
Holy plot twist, Batman! There was no way ANYone could have seen THAT coming.
If you tell me she’s a good kisser, I’ll puke. I will!
You kidding? She’s a terrible kisser, all wet and agressive. Sorry, didn’t mean to make you nauseous.
LOL! OMG – Gene’s dad and Mrs. D??? Too much fun, Alice! Great interaction between Ben and Gene! lol
Laurie
Thanks Lara.
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Oh, good grief! No one should have to see that! Poor Ben, and poor Gene.