
“You have been so helpful, Gene.” Suzie handed him the channel locks. She’d always found the channel lock wrench much more helpful than a regular plumber’s wrench, but she’d given Gene the choice. That his preferences ran along the same lines as hers pleased her. “I’m pretty sure this last job will put you over the line.”
“I’ve earned enough points to buy the guitar?” He glanced over his shoulder with a grin, and fumbled the wrench, which dropped between the washing machine and the wall. “Crap! Oh. Sorry Mrs. H. Didn’t mean to swear in front of you.” He looked down the gap between washer and wall.
“You’ll have to pull it out more.”
“No. I think I can fit.”
He was a thin boy, but Suzie had her doubts. Especially as he’d filled out a bit since moving into the house with them. He’d gained a bit in height too. For a boy of 14 he was on the tall side.
He got his feet over the back of the washing machine easily enough, but got stuck at hip level.
“I told you to pull it out more first,” she muttered as she gripped the machine. She pulled a little and he dropped down, then got his shoulders caught. “You don’t know your own size do you.”
“I can get it, Mrs. H. It’s all right.” He knocked the faucet where the washing machine hooked up to the wall and sent a spray of water all over his face.
“Careful! We don’t want to have to re-do both faucets.”
“Right.” He came back up with the wrench, which she took from him. Then he hoisted himself out of the gap between machine and wall with the muscular dexterity only a teenage boy could pull off.
While he went back to work on the hoses, she stood by.
“Gene, have you thought any more about it?” She omitted a lot in the comment, and should have realized it wouldn’t be on the top of his mind the way it was on hers.
“About what?”
“The adoption.”
“But if you adopt me, then you won’t get any money from foster care anymore, right?” He gave the wrench a final pull, then turned on the faucet.
“I can maintain the house without the money,” she assured him, though she wasn’t so sure herself. Without Drew, everything was harder.
“It’s okay. I don’t need to be adopted. I don’t need another mother.”
“Yes, you said that before, but…” It was so frustrating. She couldn’t very well drag him into it gagged and bound. It would be hard enough to convince the judge she was a fit mother, though single and unemployed. Or rather, self employed. Except who counted the owner of a boarding house as self employed?
“Have you thought anymore about looking for your birth mother?”
“Looking for… Yeah. No, I’ll think about it. Hey, can we go buy the guitar as soon as I finish this?”
“Sure.”
“Great. I’m done.” He handed her the channel locks and grinned.
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That was a lol and aww episode, Alice. Well done!
Is this a new schedule? Will we still get episodes on Friday?
I like how Gene is so sure of himself, even as he makes mistakes.
It’s a new schedule. From now on Suzie’s House will be on Wednesdays and not on Fridays. It feels odd to me, but I really wasn’t handling Fiction Friday 55, Suzie’s House, and Serialists all on the same day very well.
wonderful story all the nunances of emotion there.The child afraid to trust and the woman who wants hima s her sona fraid to push.A lovely story.
I like this a lot. To me, the mention of the foster care money and Suzie saying it didn’t matter was really significant.
I like how her not getting the money was not as important as making him more a member of the family, that the adopting would do. That means so much, especially when you are young, to know you mean more.
such a sweet piece
that reminds me, i want a guitar too >.<
Gene is a sweetie..it’s like you slipped what could have been a tricky conversation into the gap too..no wrench needed to make a very tender scene..Jae
I LOVED this story. Suzie, the wonderful mom to this young boy. The water in his face was a bit of whimsy, and I could picture every moment of the story. The complications of finances and adoption, the obvious love they share as a family unit… great stuff, Alice Audrey, and I will come back! Second time here, and you were at 3WW, thank God!
Amy
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This is a really good story I would’ve loved to read more!
Oh I can see I’ve been missing out on this serial.
I’ll have to backtrack for sure
Thanks for the visit