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Suzie’s House 234: Whose Initials

Suzie's House

“Courtney? Courtney…. Love?” Tracy touched the K.C. carved into the guitar as she spoke.

Gene watched her do it, and wanted to touch it too, to feel how rough it was, like he could get a sliver if he weren’t careful. Instead, he stuck to the wall next to Mrs. H. and watched.

“Yeah, Courtney Love of Hole. She used to be my room mate.” Fran glowered from where she sat all tied up to the chair. “I hung out with the guys from Hole and Nirvana all the time.”

“Pft. Get out of here,” Miranda said with a flip of her hand, like she thought it was a joke.

“I’m telling the truth!” If Fran could have bit Miranda, she probably would have.

“Huh. Nirvana.” Tracy looked close at the guitar. “So this is Kurt Cobain’s old guitar. I don’t remember seeing anything like it in the videos on youtube. And I looked, believe me.”

“Of course not. He’s a singer. Like me. This was his lucky guitar, Carnage.”

“He called the guitar Carnage?” Miranda smirked.

“Yes. It’s an unlucky name, but the guitar doesn’t mind. Kurt kept it back stage and played it right before they went on. He carved his initials in it just for me – his autograph. Said I could have it right then, but then Courtney came over and he forgot, and then she took it before I could.”

“Why would he give you his lucky guitar?” Tracy stopped messing with the guitar, just held it like a finger tip might puncture it.

“Because I need his luck more than he does. Did. He never understood how important it was anyway. He laughed at me when I told him it was his luck. Now look at him. Dead. And right after he Courtney took the guitar.”

“Huh,” Tracy said. She went over and sat next to Miranda on the bed, the guitar slung across their laps like they could both play it at the same time the way you could a piano.

The two of them put their heads together and mumbled. Gene crawled up on the bed behind them so he could hear everything.

“She’s lying,” Tracy said.

“Got that right, girlfriend. That or she’s delusional. No way you’re average Joe could have hung out with bands like that. Although…”

“Yeah?”

“… She is about the right age.”

“Delusional,” they both said at the same time, leaning back and looking at each other. The sameness of them was enough to make the hair on the back of Gene’s neck do uncomfortable things.

“I am NOT crazy!” Fran, practically foaming at the mouth, jerked so hard against her ropes that she almost fell over. If Mrs. H hadn’t put a hand out to steady her, she might have actually flipped.

“People have told you that before, huh?” Miranda said it with a narrow-eyed, knowing look. Gene would bet she’d heard it a few times herself. Heck, as far as Gene could tell, everyone got called crazy sometime or another.

“I’m telling the truth. Now untie me, and give me that guitar.”

“And then what?”

“And then you can follow me to Memphis for the concert of your life. It’s finally my big break. With the luck from that guitar I’ll make it big, bigger than you’ve ever seen. And you will be a part of that.”

She was nuts. So that’s what Mrs. H, meant when she said someone had stars in her eyes. Gene told himself to remember never to be like that. He didn’t mind being nuts, but not if it meant he had to be an idiot, too.

If you enjoy Suzie’s House and would like to see more, please leave a comment. Suzie’s House is powered by its readers. This is a total and complete work of fiction with no attempt to represent the true lives of any famous persons that might have been mentioned.

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12 comments to Suzie’s House 234: Whose Initials

  • Wow she thinks its Kurt’s Cobain’s guitar. she’s either delusional or correct or both.Great story Alice Audrey.

  • It’s actually not that hard to meet somebody on their way up or to do session work with a musician who is moderately well-known. I don’t find Fran’s story completely implausible. What strikes me as odd is that the guitar should have ended up in a pawn shop. Perhaps it changed hands a few times in more ordinary ways such as charity auctions and the like, until it was owned by a relative nobody whose house was broken into by a thief who didn’t know what he was really getting…

    It’s fun to speculate!

  • Be a turn up for the books if she was the real deal, wouldn’t it! Kind of hoping she is now.

  • MaryA

    Historical fiction maybe?
    How is NaNo coming along for you?

  • Brynna

    “He didn’t mind being nuts, but not if it meant he had to be an idiot, too.”

    One of my favorite lines of ALL time! Excellent! :)

  • You have tantalized for a few episodes and it is about time that something really dramatic happened (other than Fran climbing the ladder). Regardless of her credentials Fran is clearly a fruit loop but they really have to check the provenance of the guitar somehow. I am getting a itchy feeling about its imminent fate. I am not sleeping at night.

  • Being nuts can be fun..I love the verve in your writes..Jae ;)

  • Nice writing; you handle conversation beautifully.

  • I can’t wait to find out the real story of the guitar. Good job, Alice!!

  • Dang, you mean this doesn’t count at the big reveal? Just because she’s crazy doesn’t mean she’s wrong. OTOH, it doesn’t mean she’s right, either. But if you’re looking for final confirmation on this one, it’ll be a while. I’m closing down this arc in the next couple of weeks and moving to Ben and his writings. Well, that’s the plan anyway. I can never be entirely sure where I’ll end up.

  • Yeah, it’s a big reveal. And delusional or not, pretty cool way to play out the story. And man do I understand about not knowing where you’ll end up with your story. Fran is…interesting. Okay, now I’m curious where you are going to go with Ben and his writings. Wherever you go with it, I know it’ll be a fun ride.

  • I’d love to hear the truth from the guitar. Impossible, I know, but…

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