55 – An Arrangement Between Adults

“Carly, there you are. Why don’t you let yourself in?” Mom said.

“See, I told you to just come in,” Tina said.

“I know, but I feel weird if I don’t knock. I mean, I have to knock in the afternoon, why not in the morning? Just because my mother sent me?”

“Yeah. Because it’s their idea, not ours.”


The challenge, should you choose to accept it, is to write a story in exactly 55 words. Flash Fiction 55 is hosted by the G-man, a host with the most.

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