55 – Shopping for Perfection


“Humph., You think this is stylish? You know they make this stuff in sweatshops in India or China right?” The girl said to her friend. “Besides, it’s ugly on you.”

“I guess you’re right.” She put it back.

“Great! ‘Cause it’s perfect on me!” Her friend grabbed it and ran straight to the check out counter.


The challenge, should you choose to accept it, is to write a story in exactly 55 words. Flash Fiction 55 is hosted by the G-man, a host with the most.

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